FFlame Origin Fancomic pg1

First page of a fancomic detailing (in broad strokes), Exalted-comic-style, the beginnings of the Abyssal Exalt, Forgotten Flame Of Endless Unmarked Years. The scanner has not been kind to it.

Panel borders and dialogue boxes - over 9000 hours in MSPaint!

Undoubtedly, Jukashi already has something planned for Flame that easily eclipses and/or goes completely the opposite direction to this, but whatevs. A guy can dream.

A thought that amuses me, given KoC's recent art upgrade, however, is that since Flame is all but a skeleton, there will be very little difference in his appearances before and after the upgrade. Perhaps a chance to add ears, then, Jukashi?

EDIT: Argh, already I can see dialogue I'd like to change. Shifting that second Flame dialogue box back into the panel would be good, too. Bah. I've laboured too long and made too few backups to start quibbling over improvements now. Let it stand on its feet, rushed though they may be.